Mr. NAKAGAWA who teaches in Thomas more prep Marina High school began his ESL class at 2:20.
Mr. NAKAGAWA stood up after ring bell and waked close to his student Said, “everybody sat down.”
Then Mr. NAKAGAWA walked in front of white broad and used a green marker wrote become three simple sentences.
After writing down theses sentence Mr. asked us, “ Let these very simple sentence turned to nine sentences.” Mr. requested us, “These sentences must be very specific and it must have many details. No big words, No big jump.”
Mr. requested me use quotation when I write said and asked.
After class beginning I waked into ESL class in Thomas More Prep Marian High school and found my seat.
I sat down and took out my notebook with blue cover and my yellow pencil.
After listening Mr.'s request we took out pieces of paper and began our writing exercise.
My partner Alan didn’t work hard, most of our assignments finished by myself.
Alan just wrote a few sentences, so I asked him looking my assignment and fixed his assignment.
Then I gave our assignment to Mr. NAKAGAWA, Mr. fixed my sentence he asked me fix the last paragraph and delete some necessary words.
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