10/04/2010 By Jeffery

Mr. NAKAGAWA, who teaches in Thomas More Prep Marina High School, began his ESL class at 2:20.
Mr. NAKAGAWA stood up after the bell rang and walked close to his students. He said, “Everybody sits down.”
Then Mr. NAKAGAWA walked in front of the white board and used a green marker to write down three simple sentences.

After writing down theses sentences, Mr. said,” Let these very simple sentences be turned to nine sentences.” Mr. required of us, “These sentences must be very specific and must have many details. No big words. No big jumps.”
Mr. demanded us to use quotations.

When class began, I walked into ESL class in Thomas More Prep Marian High School and found my seat.
I sat down and took out my notebook with blue a cover and my yellow pencil.
Mr.'s asked to me take out pieces of paper, and all the students in his class began a writing exercise.

My partner Alan didn’t work with me. So I finished all the assignments by myself.
Alan just wrote a few sentences, so I asked him look my assignment, and I fixed his assignment.
Then I gave my assignment to Mr. NAKAGAWA. Mr. fixed my sentences, and then he asked me to fix the last paragraph and delete some unnecessary words and commas.