David Lin
Writing
08/24/08
Long plan
Today, I listened a story in the ESL class. The story talking about a fox wanted to eat grapes on the farm and had a dog stay there watching. I liked this fox because it tries to eat the grapes to work hard. First, it was thinking about how does it going on of the farm. Next, it dug a tunnel everyday but it was very small. Than, it don’t eat food to make body become the slim. Last, it ate the grapes, but it became a fat fox and it can not use the small tunnel go to the outside. I learned about we do every thing before need to think a long plan because we need a good ending for us and this is very important. Look this fox. It wanted to eat the grapes, so it tries to work and work. If have some questions, it keep thinking to get answer. It was very happy when it eats the grapes, but didn’t be safe to go back. The dog was found it. This story tell us when do something, we need to think a plan and this is a long plan. It must have beginning to ending and after ending. For example: you have a test. Than you study hard and get good point. After this, do we need keep study? We need. Before the fox come to the farm. The fox must need to think about when it finishes eating.
Writing
08/24/08
Long plan
Today, I listened a story in the ESL class. The story talking about a fox wanted to eat grapes on the farm and had a dog stay there watching. I liked this fox because it tries to eat the grapes to work hard. First, it was thinking about how does it going on of the farm. Next, it dug a tunnel everyday but it was very small. Than, it don’t eat food to make body become the slim. Last, it ate the grapes, but it became a fat fox and it can not use the small tunnel go to the outside. I learned about we do every thing before need to think a long plan because we need a good ending for us and this is very important. Look this fox. It wanted to eat the grapes, so it tries to work and work. If have some questions, it keep thinking to get answer. It was very happy when it eats the grapes, but didn’t be safe to go back. The dog was found it. This story tell us when do something, we need to think a plan and this is a long plan. It must have beginning to ending and after ending. For example: you have a test. Than you study hard and get good point. After this, do we need keep study? We need. Before the fox come to the farm. The fox must need to think about when it finishes eating.
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