Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Tatum

Tatum
09/30/09
7th hour
Fixed Fragment sentences
1. Helping students on Tuesday
- The teacher helps students today.
- Helping students is awesome.
- Helping students in the class, Mr. Hertel supports their English skills.
2. Crying like a baby
- He cries like a baby.
- Crying like a baby is so awful and horrible.
- Crying like a baby, he runs to his mom.
3. Working hard with classmates
- My dad is working hard with his team.
- Working hard with my classmates is so much fun.
- Working hard with my classmates, I make a lot of new friends.
4. Eating dog food
- My uncle eats dog food.
- Eating dog food is not good for my grand mother.
- Eating dog food, I also eat cat food.
5. Making art drawings and show to people
- I make art drawings and show to people.
- Making art drawings and showing to people is so sweet.
- Making art drawings and show to people, I make my parents proud.

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