120410 Alan Yu and Jeffery Yu

1.Mr.NAKAGAWA who teach in Thomes more prep mernine High school begin his ESL class at 2:20.
2.Mr.NAKAGAWA stood up after ring bell and waked close to his student, asked:"everybody sit down."
3.Then Mr.NAKAGAWA walked in front of white broad and used a green marher wrote down three simple sentence.

1.After writing down these sentence Mr asked us. Let very simple sentence, become three sentences.
2.Mr requestedus:" These sentences must be very sbecificary and it must has many details. No big words, No big jump."
3.Mr. requested us use quatation when we write some body" tell" "ask" and "said".

1.After class begin I waked into ESL class in Thomas More Prep morina High school and found myself seat.
2.I sat down and took out my notbook with blue cover and my yellow pencil.
3.After listening Mr's request we took out pieces of paper and began our writing exercise.

1.My patener Alan need work harder, most of our assigments did by myself.
2.Alan just wrote some sentence, so I asked him looking my assigment and fix his assigment.
3.Then I gave our assigment to Mr.NAKAGAWA, Mr fixed my sentence he asked me fix the last pargarph and delete some neccessary words.