Wang

Kelvin

ts: my country encourages young people to drink
r1:parents
ex1: my dad had asked me to drink a cup of before when we were watching TV together.
ex2: my mom had allowed me to drink beer with my brother at her party.
r2: no check id
ex1: i went to KTV with my friends and then we ordered beers. the waiter did not even check id.
ex2: celebrating the new year, my brother and i went to convenience store to bu beer.
r3: some of my friends like to drink
ex1:i am not goot at drinking. but in a party every one drink and i need to drink.
ex2: on moon festival, my friends always ask me out to get drunk and go back to home late

Wang

Wang

Feb 9

My country encourage young people to drink.

Reason 1: Family

Example 1: My father enjoy drinking makes me want to drink.

Example 2: My parents took me go outside for dinner with their friends. they always wanted me to drink, and helped them.

Reason 2: Watching TV.

Example 1: Many alcohol companies wanted people choose them, they made their alcohol advertisement very nice to encourage people drinking.

Example 2: many young people in the teleplay enjoyed the alcohol, and they drank when they felt bad or good. Those made me wanted to drink.

Reason 3: Do not check ID

Example 1: We don't need check ID in China when we bought alcohol in a shop even we were too young to drink.

Example 2: we don't need scared about the police when we are drinking outside in China because the police would not check our ID even we drank alcohol in front of them.

Chad Gong

Chad Gong

9^th FEB

Topic sentence, In China, country encourages adherences to drink alcohol.

Reason1, Ad about alcohol attracts me.

Ex. When I was 7 years old, I saw a post about a charming girl drinks beer. I thought that must be tasted well.

Ex2. 2 days later, I saw an AD on TV. 2 guys were finishing and dishing in beautiful scenery. It might felt fantastic when people drink.

Reason2, Parents encourage me to drink.

Ex. One day, my dad drunk and come back to home. He worried about me who don’t know how to drink lives in china society in the feature.

Ex2. My mom wants me drink with my grandpa because he likes drink beer so much and always felt lonely.

Reason3, my same age friends drink a lot.

Ex. One day, my friends ask me out for drink but I didn’t want, and they laugh at me. I decided to drink beer.

Ex2. One day, I hang out and drink beer in front of my friend, and they told me I was so cool when I drink beer.